It's only fair I share my views with you i.e. my comic. As it has been posted I have slowly been overwhelmed with the feeling that it is in many ways a disappointment for my audience, you fine folks. Which is to say at the least a disheartening idea to confront. Especially given the time and effort so far devoted. I in no way mean to whine, but to simply ask what the nature of your complaint or complaints.
As these pages have been posted I've noticed many comments expressing confusion as to the narrative thread, one issue at least I intend to tackle now. I have no intention as a writer to make a storybook; this will never be a picture book with every action clearly written there in a convenient bubble/box for you. The idea for my comic is to visually communicate a story left open to an individuals interpretation. I have no designs on insulting my readers or friends and maybe its wrong of me to think of it in such simple terms, but I can't help but feel that doing nothing more then a stepped up storybook would insult people especially those who have supported me so much. If I'm wrong please correct me.
What I think would greatly help is an understanding that this will eventually be a 30+ page comic and as this goes on the plot will become if not crystal then sliding glass door clear.
I would greatly appreciate any comments or suggestions you have, especially those of you who may not care for what I have those far posted. As much as I'm doing this for myself a large part of it is for you. It doesn't make sense to write and draw something no one else really wants to see or read.
Thank you so much for dealing with my rant hopefully this is the last, odds are I will never again mention anything so dramatic, because quite frankly I'm no bitch.